and I have felt the shudder as if I was blown away by the leaves,
There was little that I could do out there but I chose not to.
I simply surrendered my will, gave up my all and turned to you.
~ Juvan Guevarra
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| Deep poems about life |
But then came some more fusions which tore me more with strife.
I was slipping through and trying hard, but to no avail.
Then my mind stopped comprehending like an unending trail.
Then I thought to myself, who may the maker be?
Who created me to live like this and who could still see me?
I was dwelling on thoughts, curiosity arose from his cycle
All questions answered when a passing priest passed me a bible.
~ Pit Cuba
My life has been like a drop in a flowing river which has no real escape.
It keeps flowing
through and through but feels nothing great.
An individual who is lost in such a greater part that it knows not who it is,
It has no real direction, connected without freedom.
~ Milwaukee Strength
These beautiful birds still bring happiness to everyone.
But tomorrow what will they look like? Will they stay?
They own their world so will they just fly away?
Answerable to no one, they choose their own destiny.
~ Corn Stiller
Life must have a deeper meaning than just existence.
I have tried to find it all throughout with persistence.
But could not find it in all the troubles and complexity.
Just then did I find it at the feet of love and simplicity.
~ Wayne Jepson
How to create deep poems about life?
Every poem needs a rhyme and you can create that with ease if you know the list of words that you need to rhyme. To make this process which may seem tedious to some, much more easier it is important to google search all the rhyming words. This will make the steps breezy. Next up you need a story to back you up or lets say back your poem.
Every poem will need it, something that the poem can stand on. Of course you can go wildly random but having a story to back up will captivate the readers. Deep poems require deeper ideas. You need to do some soul searching and some back flashing. With time and practice you will be able to write them and create really touching deep poems about life.
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